Free Write: What if...

What if...
My last school was still here and I still went there. I think that my friends and I would still talk all the time, and we wouldn't be so split up. I would probably be in the Social Studies advisory class, just like I am here at New Media. At my old school which was, Ivy Leaf Middle School, I think it would be a lot of teachers who are only going on their second year of teaching at my old school. I also believe that things wouldn't have been so crazy this year like it was last year because, of the changes we going through. I would also have loved it if my old principal had came back along with the vice principal. They were very nice to me all the time. I guess it probably was because,I never really got into trouble with any of my teachers. I really miss my school, teachers, and my friends. But I actually think that it worked out for the best for me because if my school didn't close I wouldn't have met so many new teachers, and friends.



Focus: I would give myself a 3 on the focus.
Content: I would give myself a 2 on the content.
Organization: i would give myself a 4 on organization.
Style: i would give myself a 4 on style.
Conventions: I would give myself a 3 on conventions.

Free Write: Family

 My family is pretty much I would call big. My family and I have a great relationship with each other. We share a lot of  good time times together, and of corse you always have those days when things don't go so well. I love my family very dearly and I am sure that they love me just as much as I love them.

My grand-mom  is a wonderful person(my moms mom). I love her a lot. I do a lot of things with her. My grand-mom I would say pretty much spoils me. She buys things whenever she can if I ask her for it. She has 6 children and 1 of them being my mother, 4 girls, and 2 boys. My grand-mom is a very strong person and is always helping someone in the family. My grand-mom loves to clean. I love my grand-mom and I always will. 

I have 1 brother,and 1 sister. My brother is older than me and my sister is younger. My sister, brother, and I have a good relationship, even though my sister and me argue sometimes.

My mom and dad have been married for 13 years and it will be 14 September 18. My mother and father have a great relationship with each other and share mostly everything with each other. 

Focus: I would give myself a 4 because I did pretty much explain my family.

Content: I would give myself a 3 on this one because, I don't think I actually created a vivid mind move.